>>7607692
thanks for pointing that out! I see what you mean and tried to play around it with it till I just redrew the faces. updated version

>>7607673
Honestly I really like the new colors. I also like the pose, I feel like the thing skewing the whole picture is the face placement. You did improve, its just the right side had a more difficult angle and it was easy to mess up a little. How about redrawing it with a reference on hand? Try again, don't give up. You can fix it:)

>>7607671
so clean!!

>>7607221
common problem I believe, couple days ago I saw a youtube video talking about tempo in drawing, how when you have these 'holy shit i cant do anything right' days it's bc youre doing it too fast or too slow. I started using music to combat it (i.e fast music if youre being sluggish and slow when youre too caffinated and adhd) that helps kinda