>>7650858
Nta but here's mine and I'm seconding his request.

>>7644962
Thank you anon, I tried to slow down and incorporate the idea of what you're telling me to the drawing, trying to have thicker lines where I feel there should be more weight and where two different objects meet and I think the left girl turned out a little better now.

And I figures out how to do a lighter stroke with them pen (use it sideways lol) and so I did the right girl with light + normal strokes. I'll continue to practice and improve.

Much thanks.

Still, pls critique before I move to doing a value study of this.

I also haven't doodled or drawn from imagination in a couple of days so I'll take some time to do that. Studies are exhausting.