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8/9/2025, 12:26:01 PM
Even after a ton of fanservice in chapter 4 this relationship feels really forced to me. idk it just didn't feel natural, like a teen relationship written by a committee of old men for a tv sitcom. The plot demands that they will be together so they are. I don't see them ever hanging out if Noelle wasn't obsessively horny for Susie. Both Susie and Noelle have way more chemistry with other characters than they do with each other. If Toby is so hell bent on making this happen why can't he write them with better chemistry? He can do it, why isn't he?
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