People on the warhammer thread wont respond, so I'm gonna post my fanfic here
I ask the other gender (female) what do you think of it

The steel warship was sleek and imposing, its chromite finish liek a flash of illuminating dagger in the dark abyss of space.
The ship was feerl yet civilized, modern yet anceint, hre the great khan gatheed around the great bonfire that had been kept allite every since the virgin
journy from ChoreGorus.
"Yaaaah, my brothers another succeseful hunt of orc swine, surely we the most swift and dedly of fther's twenty blades." said the khan
"Yaaah" said the white scar space marines "Praise the Epmpeor" said the white scars again
"Yes, Yes praise the emperor too"
In truth the khan never shared the zeal of his brothers too the emperor, he was just too perfect, too polished, he had seen shcuh attempts at a
manfurected personality cult on chorgorus, and reading the many holotapes in terra he had learned about simimarl leaders in terra's past such as
a strange man who cate fermented cabbage and an orange man who swung metal clubs at balls
He had alwyes harbored reservations but had always let it slide for the sake of cohesion
"NoWWW we sail to new land, to conquer more !!!!!!"
"YAAAAAHHHHH" replied the whote scars