>>7678447
thanks for the feedback, might have been too slow on the start, although the scene directly afterwards starts to get interesting, so once I;ve finished the chapter we'll see if its more interesting, and also yeah some of those things I listed are in the first chapter, but most are spread around the topic, so I shouldnt be cramming in too much shit. I've tried to pace this like a movie, which again, we'll see how the opening works once I'm done

>>7678536
Yeah I probably need to let stuff breath way more, and also work on my bubbles, cause Im sorta struggling to figure out how big the bubbles should be to fit my text in at a consistent size. So I'll try and work on those 2 things, especially since some of the next pages I'll be doing soon are gonna be more "actiony" with our characters trapped underwater, so I'll reference some mangas and try and use their techniques.
And thanks about the 2 main characters, hopefully they stay interesting with the predicaments I'm gonna give them