>>527212549
the knight laughing at susie about her comment is one of the big hangups I have with december knight. it doesn't make sense unless the knight DOES have power, if not over everyone than over susie personally. the other hangup is just how susie-centric the knight plotline is. why would a plotline that is so heavily tapping into her character growth center on a character she's never met?

I think, for highest emotional impact, the knight needs to be somebody susie actually knows and cares about to maximize the betrayal