I think I'm gonna move to cleaning the line art.
>>42193391
Yeah, I changed the poses a bit and it definitely helps.
>>42193720
>Shit at drawing
don't worry, we're 2 in that boat.
>I'd make the bodies more stretchy, have sweetie belle droop around the arm a bit from both sides and stretch out scoots torso, maybe move them further away from dale so it looks like they ran a fair bit already
Yeah I tried to make Sweetie a bit more droopy, as for Scootaloo I chose the opposite approach, since they're not running away from Dale, but rather backing up towards him, I also made them closer.
>I'd steal some poses from winter wrap up
I rewatched the entire episode, I have no idea what poses you wanted me to steal.
>>42193811
Thanks anon.
As for the fic, I'd recommend it A LOT. I wanted to read 1 or 2 chapters before working on something, I ended up reading the entire 23 chapters currently available in one go. It also made me discover (and watch) KOTH. I know the creator of the fic hangs around /mlp/ sometimes, so if you see this, thanks a lot dude, and keep up the good work.