>>24472481
>Dialogue was decent, felt realistic
That's flattering, thanks. I worry about dialogue and unique voices sometimes.

>but it did make for a poor example in this case because I felt pretty bored by the content
Understandable.

>IT DOES NOT MATTER
But I cannot stop myself from caring about that fiction rank number! That said staying the course has seen steady and accelerating (if slowly) growth so I'm content to finish this story and take lessons learned into the next one.

>elegant giggling isn't a thing, it can't be visualized
I feel like any elegant 'ojousama' character giggles elegantly when they're not going all out with an ohoho laugh, but I can't be assed to find examples. I'll see how I feel in the morning and I'll reconsider changing it to tittered and just trust my audience to use context and google to figure out what the hell I meant.

Thanks for the feedback!