Shameless self-promotion

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/118792/shattered-pantheon

I've been getting getting into fleshing out the world, but I made the mistake of glossing over things early on out of fear of too much exposition scaring off readers. Lack of feedback, good or bad, is starting to drain my motivation though.

Give me your thoughts. I'd like to improve sooner rather than later.