stippling or stroking for camo patterns?

Rate the intro to my indie game I'm gonna make in the future (I'm not a game dev btw)
>fade into a forest at twilight
>above the canopy of spruce trees on the horizon rises the silhouette of tower, pointed and sharp
>gentle harp music plays for a moment- suddenly interrputed by- BLAM-BOOM-CRACK
>an EXPLOSION see in the distance of purple and green smoke, debris flying everywhere
>camera cuts to the POV of the protagonist, arms and legs flapping in the wind as he flies (falls) through the air
>*SPLASH* a safe landing in a deep pond
>he rises up from the water and coughs, magic smoke still lingering around his body, camera angled behind him as he looks at his blown up tower
>*RIBBIT* a large frog hops and lands square on his head
>the player notices, while the boy doesn't, that he begins to turn a little green, so to speak
>"what the h*ck was that?Maybe I don't know as much about magic as I think I do..."
[first dialog choice]
>Yeah. I should've been more careful.
>Nah. I did everything right. The tome must have been written by a d*mmy
>Whatever, that was fun atleast!
>"but it's gonna be a pain to clean that up. Atleast only the top exploded."
>*tower crumbles in the distance*