>>11336470
Thanks! First little snippet is a little silly with the head bump to world transition I'll admit. I may go back and change that later.

Anyway, I've finished the first chapter, which is mostly the same as what was already posted plus an additional scene at the end:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1y_PjrPXj2o4mhopAq7r8LFDVBk4z50nztNwMWxI-pHs/edit?usp=sharing

I've also finished with chapter 2, bring the word count up to just under 5,000 and a half words:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ETqTy6JsGW-Yza245vWtNDLy9lB03Sx__I76HMw41a0/edit?usp=sharing

The proper setting and a few more characters are introduced in the second chapter. They were fun to write.

I wonder if I should post this somewhere more tangible, like tfstorytime or deviantart or something?