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Ignatius:
Lawrence of Arabia reference? Zased. I, for one, really enjoy the expanding on the world around the tournament (despite me not doing it) and here we have not just the team, but also other contestants and the announcers. The general feeling of the comic is a cozy wacky comicbook which I do enjoy alot. I am biased, I know. I do miss the colours, which are evidently your strong suit when you look at the last 2 pages.
Jugglejack:
OH I'M JUGGLEJACKING OFF OOOOH. That out of the way, I like the b/w style here, the visuals are very clear.
However where is the dunesurfing? I am dissappointed, because it could've been so much more.
Vote: Ignatius

Atta:
Where is the yuri!? Joking. Or am I? Anyhow, interesting story with for me an unexpected turn and a set-up for next rounds.
Zehya:
Stop making the girls so sexy, I'm trying to hit X, not get an erection. I however, am very pleased with the set-up of your visual novel.
Vote: Zehya

Hemma:
Beautiful b/w and setting the stage. Very good incorporation of your opponent
Henry:
Black and white once more, what a beautiful day. I think you could've given the surrounding world more exposure, or shown team dynamics a tad bit more. Action was pretty good.
Vote: Hemma

Cops:
Poor lads, crushed by an entity they could not have seen coming. I do like the general imagery. It expands the world well, the dynamic between the teams too. You might want to sit and grind fundamentals, because I did enjoy the writing alot.
Midori & Nio:
I love this goofy style at the start, genuinely sad that they didn't make it :(
I do like the style, it feels like something I would've read while on holiday in the Robbedoes/Spirou.
Vote: not allowed