>>7622891
it may be fucked up but if no one tells you, youre not gonna improov.
the reason I said youre prebeg, is because you dont seem to know what you're doing. you're making guidelines, then not using them, thats what i can tell from that drawing you posted. that implies you dont understand what you're doing, you don't know why you're making the guidelines and then use them in the wrong way.
either way, hope you improve, start learning some loomis it'll help with your problems.
attached is my low/beg/ attempt of the girl in your picture.