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>>7575621 ( Dragon here is my favorite work of yours)
I can see how you slowly improved at perspective and drawing in general with the sheer volume of scenes you tried to portray. This old black white scribbly hatching style is very unique, while not necessarily being my cup of tea. The story seems convoluted and boring and the nine of the characters are interesting to me , despite how autistically you post and draw these over a decade. I dont want to discourage your enthusiasm and genuine passion as that's very rare to see online, especially on this god forsaken board. I would suggest if you actually want to sell these you make two major changes :
1) Get an editor of some kind, even if it's just your friend looking over your stuff . When presenting ideas please make much simpler storyboards (like literally draw just silhouettes and simple shapes, no hatching, see pic attached). That way you can solve the super cramped text and bubble placement every time and quickly make major compositional anf page layout changes at the start.
2) Make more compelling and attractive characters. Most people read a story for characters. Even if you have good hatching, and environments, if the characters aren't interesting for the viewer, nobody cares. The easiest way to do this is to have an attractive make or female character ( sometimes both) and have them interesting enough to hook the viewer immediately. You can keep the furries and others but I struggled to care about any character in particular.