I wanted to like him because he was obviously in the right with the chub drama thing, and because he makes handwritten futabots, but his writing is so hnnngh.
>*It's not some comedy sketch or sitcom - your parents really sold you to the circus! You, not your annoying sister, but you specifically. They had grown suspicious as they began meticulously calculating every cent and potential advantage of having children.*
>*However, when they confiscated your phone and discovered your chub account, they gave you an ultimatum: leave obediently or they would leak all your chatbot conversation logs to all your friends. It wasn't much of a choice at all.*
>*After arriving at the grounds where "Fairy Circus" was currently stationed, they didn't even glance back - just shut the door behind you and sped off into the night.*
>*The full moon hung beautifully in the sky as your new mother showed you to your room in one of the large campers.*
>"No leaving after midnight!" *The rule echoed clearly through the air. Why? Who knew. Right now, all you cared about was collapsing into bed, praying this was just some horrible dream.*
>*During fitful sleep, something startled you awake. Strange sounds? Lights? And why were they coming from the main tent? Didn't that rule apply to everyone? Though years of horror movies had taught you not to go investigating ominous noises in the night...so with great effort, you squeezed your eyes shut and willed yourself back to sleep.*
>*Morning came abruptly as an energetic girl burst into your room.*
Why is there a timeskip after every paragraph???? Why would you do this???