>>7633637
2nd Page done. I fixed two typos in the first page. I really need to keep the previous page at sight, to avoid changing faces and designs in every fucking new page. That's a real problem I have. I'm shit at consistency on character design.
>>7632877
>Take it slow peril, if you don't have a clear story you want to do right now
Thank you anon! Oh, I have the story clear.. it's just that, you're right about the motivation thing, I really need to avoid other stuff to not get tempted to "abandon ship" in pursuit of random "mermaids" singing some pretty random shit, lol
>>7633122
Wow, I really admire artists doing those elaborated monochrome manga style renderings and backgrounds. I don't know how you guys do that. Like that tree on the window. Mad envy.
>>7633147
I still love this figure, look at her face! Nice one Tremor!
>>7633183
Nothing is wrong, great figure, she looks perfect. I like her torso, triceps and legs proportions, Saved.
>>7633290
I love this! I like her legs
>>7633298
Great work on that hand and arm foreshortening, and the face is perfect
>>7633365
You do the most beautiful faces anon!
>>7633386
SAVED!!!!!
>>7633435
Tremor? This is my favorite work from you in this thread