im trying a new style, freddie dredd/doomshop influence, relaxed but with heavy drums. i dont know if ive really hit the mark but i have 3 demos any criticism harsh or otherwise would be helpful even if you just think it sounds like shit

https://vocaroo.com/11vOTYDavV8W
https://vocaroo.com/1f6nVana4zqu
https://vocaroo.com/15CfAW362VCY