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7/23/2025, 5:18:30 PM
>>7660584
Baboon Attack [RESTRICTED]
I think it’s fair to comment even though voting is clipped. Mel knows what I think about their comic given I watched the creation progress so I’ll spend time on Speedrun’s instead.
Speedrun I wish stuck more with the setting but the actual metrics for the round are technically met. There’s baboons and and attack, Melody and Speedrun are both present. But I don’t think the problem is the thin setting but more the sheer disconnect it feels from crab. Speedrun is part of a team, in a multiversal competition, but this entry feels more like a typical comic of his actual story he comes from.
Desert (Berry)
These two comics feel a bit different enough for me to have to consider specific metrics.
Head Investigator’s near instant willingness to shoot Berry instantly got a bark of a laugh from me. There’s a couple funny moments in your entry actually, but spaced by what I’d call questionable shots (like the roaches or HI mutilating Berno, both felt a bit extreme). Lots of typos in the text.
Berry’s entry has an ambience I really enjoy and it’s consistent in its storytelling and its jokes. Berry’s also so damn cute when she’s vulnerable too, and you made shots where HI is real intimidating and fucking cool.
Temple (Zehya)
Difficult to vote for. Zehya’s game is impressive and quite fun but Atta’s entry has that incredible twist that spikes it up in my eyes by capitalizing on crab activities that happened before the tourney even started.
Zehya winning the battle but losing the war in her entry no matter if you ace or fail is a nice touch, as is the brief examination into the Coven dynamics. Atta’s is more personal but her domination over weak-willed Zehya is fascinating to watch. Ultimately I’m content to save the poisoning twist for later because Zehya’s entry is truly impressive to me (if anyone contrives means for their characters to know about being poisoned that have no means to divine that I’m judging you so hard)
Baboon Attack [RESTRICTED]
I think it’s fair to comment even though voting is clipped. Mel knows what I think about their comic given I watched the creation progress so I’ll spend time on Speedrun’s instead.
Speedrun I wish stuck more with the setting but the actual metrics for the round are technically met. There’s baboons and and attack, Melody and Speedrun are both present. But I don’t think the problem is the thin setting but more the sheer disconnect it feels from crab. Speedrun is part of a team, in a multiversal competition, but this entry feels more like a typical comic of his actual story he comes from.
Desert (Berry)
These two comics feel a bit different enough for me to have to consider specific metrics.
Head Investigator’s near instant willingness to shoot Berry instantly got a bark of a laugh from me. There’s a couple funny moments in your entry actually, but spaced by what I’d call questionable shots (like the roaches or HI mutilating Berno, both felt a bit extreme). Lots of typos in the text.
Berry’s entry has an ambience I really enjoy and it’s consistent in its storytelling and its jokes. Berry’s also so damn cute when she’s vulnerable too, and you made shots where HI is real intimidating and fucking cool.
Temple (Zehya)
Difficult to vote for. Zehya’s game is impressive and quite fun but Atta’s entry has that incredible twist that spikes it up in my eyes by capitalizing on crab activities that happened before the tourney even started.
Zehya winning the battle but losing the war in her entry no matter if you ace or fail is a nice touch, as is the brief examination into the Coven dynamics. Atta’s is more personal but her domination over weak-willed Zehya is fascinating to watch. Ultimately I’m content to save the poisoning twist for later because Zehya’s entry is truly impressive to me (if anyone contrives means for their characters to know about being poisoned that have no means to divine that I’m judging you so hard)
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