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7/22/2025, 9:35:17 AM
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Is this the current version of Luminary? I thought Rake said something about removing the influence of the Outfits on powers.
It looks good overall, although I do see some typos - the kind of stuff spellcheck would struggle with, like fantasy names (Yharum vs. Yharnum, dark vs. Dark). It also feels a bit . . .Sailor Moon meets Werewolf the Apocalypse, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Might be a bit lore heavy at the end, though.
(I do, however, reserve the right to chuckle whenever someone mentions the name of the Dark spirit of Fire.)
Still, a very nice cyoa. Thanks for sharing!
Is this the current version of Luminary? I thought Rake said something about removing the influence of the Outfits on powers.
It looks good overall, although I do see some typos - the kind of stuff spellcheck would struggle with, like fantasy names (Yharum vs. Yharnum, dark vs. Dark). It also feels a bit . . .Sailor Moon meets Werewolf the Apocalypse, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Might be a bit lore heavy at the end, though.
(I do, however, reserve the right to chuckle whenever someone mentions the name of the Dark spirit of Fire.)
Still, a very nice cyoa. Thanks for sharing!
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