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6/20/2025, 6:19:30 PM
>>713181018
>We need a bland plot device for the "mystery" part of the plots, which was added into the story in the very late development stage.
>To make this bland plot device Zack look less a hasty & abruptly inserted bland plot device? Maybe make some linkages between him and the main heroine would help (Unfortunately, it didn't).
And brainlets thinks that's some well planned shit.
>We need a bland plot device for the "mystery" part of the plots, which was added into the story in the very late development stage.
>To make this bland plot device Zack look less a hasty & abruptly inserted bland plot device? Maybe make some linkages between him and the main heroine would help (Unfortunately, it didn't).
And brainlets thinks that's some well planned shit.
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