>>8928607
A few. I've already mentioned about Xipa's POV. I think that is my biggest gripe. Outside of that, I do not agree with the ally bugs being there. Not so much as "I despise them" but more as a means of this is a story of her & the species first colonized world. Since I do not wish to make this into a wall of text. I will end that part there. [spoiler]Two new characters were introduced. I can't help but feel as though that they'll be relevant later when the ally bugs become more prominent in the story. Outside of that, it felt like filler especially with the fact that they're not prevalent when Vos reveals his rag tag team to Xipa.[/spoiler]

I'm currently on Chapter 5, contrary to what I've said from before. I do like the characters. At least their first impressions. Even the furry wasn't unbearable - yet.

Outside of that, the story has been quite enjoyable. Though I must admit that the Prologue is by far my favorite moment in the story. Speaking of which, [spoiler]I might be blind but I would've liked to have seen Chala's strengths more if that makes any sense.[/spoiler]