>>149083517
Great job, anon!
You made such a lovely piece.
> she probably should have more meat on her bones, yeah? Or maybe I'm missing something.
i mean, not really, she doesn't have to be too beefy, and i don't see a problem with your version of Billie,so don't worry about it
>>149082176
>You don't know what a snallygaster is, do you? Let's just say they steal cows.
>What about moon-eyed people? Weird little fellas with huge moon colored eyes who can only see at night. Make them like secret informants maybe.
oooh i like this thanks
>Interesting opening for the story. I feel you should've introduced Grace's caretaker for the summer though.
Thanks, and yeah, you are probably right but i was just testing the waters before i can start going forward.
And I see that i can probably make this work, but who knows.