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6/14/2025, 2:33:38 PM
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>>712625667
NTA. There are many reasons why it is my least favorite of the non-release chapters.
>unimportant side characters
From Paula and Camille, to the vampire trio. Now you might think; "well wasn't this the case with all other chapters?" not quite. Several side characters in other chapters, even if destined to die in the end, all have at least some impact in the story and most importantly the protagonist sinner.
That is not the case for chapter 7. The fixer duo is presented as being of some importance and one of them is fought, then later when both are found dead they just serve to be a filler fight which is of no importance whatsoever to the narrative except to say they're dead. The vampire trio does not serve any purpose in particular in the end either, nor do they bring any form of change into Don Quixote.
That is the role of only 2 characters, the blue fag and the real Don. These two were the only characters that mattered.
In fact the side characters had such little importance that they just introduced two important characters from Hong Lu's story to make things smoother.
>flashbacks in part 3
Unbearable amount of flashbacks which were little importance apart from having Don saying some lines after a filler fight. I will say that this was a huge problem in chapter 8 as well, but at least they had the good sense to keep them to the 2nd part instead of the final climatic part.
There could have been twice or half the amount of flashbacks, and it wouldn't have changed a thing because they didn't impact Don who had already her mind set. Don who changes her mind later anyways due to the power of friendship.
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>>712625667
NTA. There are many reasons why it is my least favorite of the non-release chapters.
>unimportant side characters
From Paula and Camille, to the vampire trio. Now you might think; "well wasn't this the case with all other chapters?" not quite. Several side characters in other chapters, even if destined to die in the end, all have at least some impact in the story and most importantly the protagonist sinner.
That is not the case for chapter 7. The fixer duo is presented as being of some importance and one of them is fought, then later when both are found dead they just serve to be a filler fight which is of no importance whatsoever to the narrative except to say they're dead. The vampire trio does not serve any purpose in particular in the end either, nor do they bring any form of change into Don Quixote.
That is the role of only 2 characters, the blue fag and the real Don. These two were the only characters that mattered.
In fact the side characters had such little importance that they just introduced two important characters from Hong Lu's story to make things smoother.
>flashbacks in part 3
Unbearable amount of flashbacks which were little importance apart from having Don saying some lines after a filler fight. I will say that this was a huge problem in chapter 8 as well, but at least they had the good sense to keep them to the 2nd part instead of the final climatic part.
There could have been twice or half the amount of flashbacks, and it wouldn't have changed a thing because they didn't impact Don who had already her mind set. Don who changes her mind later anyways due to the power of friendship.
(cont)
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