>>42377896

>In conclusion, Equestria Games is a great episode. Not only do I consider it the best Spike-focused episode, I think it's the best episode in S4 and one of the best in the show's entire run. It's got some great character moments, the jokes are fucking superb, the moral lesson is very meaningful, it does an excellent job of weaving worldbuilding with the plot, and there are a lot of lessons about good storytelling to be drawn from it.
You followed the essay structure correctly even adding the conclusion as is normal, but as the conclusion 100% shows off you aren't exactly the best at judging tastes, picking apart and choosing favorable categories of entertainment & thought-provoking narrative, neither judging the merit and quality of the lessons, worldbuilding, jokes, character arcs, dialogue outside other narratives and compared to other works and real life comparison to dialogue. Someone who needs a tasteful person would fail you or rank you only half. You have a very naive judgement skill almost like you lived in a cubicle all your life and most would compare you to an AI lacking life experience.

If I were an asshole I'd give you a mediocre 8/10, but since I'm not and let's say I'm judging based off an average high school essay and all your words are original rather than copied (sadly most schools demand you follow 1 direction, but I'm too nice) I can give you a 9/10 based on a bachelor's degree's requirements. I can't give you 10/10 due to some mistakes. For a 60s, 70s, 80s literature public college with entrance exam you'd probably be ranked around 8/10 or even lower depending on the subject matter you're writing about(especially if you're put to write an original imaginative story by yourself), but overall....

Grade 9/10 technically.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ZEuWJ4muYc&ab_channel=DontYouWorryAboutQuotes


Characters 19695
words 3411
sentences 160
paragraphs 23
spike 61 good
twilight 22 good
character 14 good
good 13 good
No repeated words. That's good.


4/4