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6/24/2025, 2:20:38 AM
>>713480728
It messes with the progression. The extras were written when their relationship was further along. You'd have a chapter where the main character still has trouble talking to her to them flirting, then back to being awkward. It evens out eventually but early chapters sometimes feel disjointed.
It messes with the progression. The extras were written when their relationship was further along. You'd have a chapter where the main character still has trouble talking to her to them flirting, then back to being awkward. It evens out eventually but early chapters sometimes feel disjointed.
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