Working on OC based on Werewolf the Apocalypse, but I fear that I'm getting a little too crunchy with it.
Everything is WIP and subject to change, but this is what I came up with for Gifts (basically just superpowers), a tree with five abilities. For the WIP test version at least, players will start with three free Gifts and get three Rage and three Will to spend on twenty-four trees like this. That's a total of a hundred and twenty different superpowers to choose between.
Is this too clunky and mechanical for a CYOA and should I focus on simplifying it, or should I continue working on it as-is and post the WIP test version when I'm done with it?