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>So, if you have any suggestions or ideas, please don't hesitate to share.
With this whole vibe, I can totally see the story featuring an absolutely evil creature—one that breaks the mold of typical "cryptid" beings and leans more into disturbing than just scary.
I know it's a bit extreme for a /coc/ story, but I was thinking of someone like Judge Holden from Blood Meridian (minus the child rape)—a truly terrifying and unsettling "person" who would make both Billie and the city girl genuinely afraid.
not excatly him but like a man who lives in the town with them and looked normal and all until the girls finds an old pic of him in the civil war and his look didn't change or something like this.
i just got the idea and had to share it with you.