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6/9/2025, 3:29:37 PM
>>57889843
I like the idea of Ingrained May eventually going nuts, lashing out at Roselia and blaming it for their predicament, because it'd be such an easy thing to do. Assuming they can communicate at the bottom of the ocean, there can be conflict where May begs Roselia to let her die, but Roselia refuses. And if May continues to harass and blame Roselia for everything, their relationship can be ruined (pair this with flashbacks of how May met Roselia in the first place, or what made Roselia so loyal to her to begin with). I also like the idea of May getting rescued far in the future, except I don't see her starting a new life afterwards, that's too much of a happy ending. So maybe some people just fish her up and she lives just long enough for everyone to get video proof of it, only to flop over dead on the boat/pier, either because her body/soul is too worn out, or she just gave up upon realizing everyone she cared about is dead.
The final tragedy would be Roselia still being alive (it was rescued with May). May not hanging on for its sake means Roselia's years of keeping its trainer alive were useless, that their relationship didn't endure the tragedy they experienced together. That maybe if Roselia had just let May die to begin with, at least May would've died her friend. But now Roselia is alone, captured by strangers for scientific study.
I guess I want May to be found so she can leave a tangible legacy on future civilization, so her experience has a purpose beyond just navel gazing/torture porn. But to keep the creepypasta depressing, she dies soon after being found, so she'd never experience the fruits of her legacy herself. One of Pokemon's biggest themes is also the relationship between humans and Pokemon, and by couching a lot of this story in the deteriorating bond between May and Roselia, you can end up with something surprisingly "on brand" for an edgy creepypasta. While also making it even more tragic than the base concept.
I like the idea of Ingrained May eventually going nuts, lashing out at Roselia and blaming it for their predicament, because it'd be such an easy thing to do. Assuming they can communicate at the bottom of the ocean, there can be conflict where May begs Roselia to let her die, but Roselia refuses. And if May continues to harass and blame Roselia for everything, their relationship can be ruined (pair this with flashbacks of how May met Roselia in the first place, or what made Roselia so loyal to her to begin with). I also like the idea of May getting rescued far in the future, except I don't see her starting a new life afterwards, that's too much of a happy ending. So maybe some people just fish her up and she lives just long enough for everyone to get video proof of it, only to flop over dead on the boat/pier, either because her body/soul is too worn out, or she just gave up upon realizing everyone she cared about is dead.
The final tragedy would be Roselia still being alive (it was rescued with May). May not hanging on for its sake means Roselia's years of keeping its trainer alive were useless, that their relationship didn't endure the tragedy they experienced together. That maybe if Roselia had just let May die to begin with, at least May would've died her friend. But now Roselia is alone, captured by strangers for scientific study.
I guess I want May to be found so she can leave a tangible legacy on future civilization, so her experience has a purpose beyond just navel gazing/torture porn. But to keep the creepypasta depressing, she dies soon after being found, so she'd never experience the fruits of her legacy herself. One of Pokemon's biggest themes is also the relationship between humans and Pokemon, and by couching a lot of this story in the deteriorating bond between May and Roselia, you can end up with something surprisingly "on brand" for an edgy creepypasta. While also making it even more tragic than the base concept.
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