>>49665111
>>49665155
>>49674128
i am a big fan of your work. i like the moe approach you're going for. please disregard my reply if you are not soliciting opinions on it.
the contrast of an oversized head the same width as the shoulders vs. a regular adult woman body with wide hips is giving off a bit of a bobblehead or midget effect to me rather than moe.
i think perhaps making the waist:hip ratio a bit less dramatic will give off a more "girlish" bishoujo look, if that is your goal. enlarging the eyes may help too.