>>7676541
Page 18 done
>>7677334
>Your story is very engaging this time. If I had one criticism, it's the heroine's expression doesn't change enough even though she's giving them shit for what's happening. It makes her face come across as haughty but not really angry and at this point I can imagine her face souring a bit. Nice work all the same though, I'm looking forward to the struggle ahead.
Thank you so much! Yes, actually I thought the same as you when I saw the page almost done, and trying facial expressions was one of my goals here, but I do it so quick that I find myself trapped with a finished page and not enough time to redraw the faces again. I need to practice faces on the side.
>>7678610
Hey cool sketch!
>>7678607
This is great perspective work!
>>7678452
Cool face and composition!
>>7678427
This is real art!
>>7678254
This is a really nice piece deerbro!
>>7678183
Nice, give him a beard, and a hat
>>7678119
Woah! this is cool!
>>7678098
This is great for ten hours, I like the hand specially.