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It really helps if you don't read amateurly written webnovels, LNs, or chink stuff or at least don't make it a major part of your literacy diet. You can if you want to but it bleeds into your writing for often the worst and readers(really, the snobbish litanon) will pick up on it right away. But the funny thing about this for the opposite argument is the average sloppers (not just on RR—spacebattles and scribblehub too) don't care too much about bad prose or really just bad writing in general because they're too invested in the story to care. Reading isn't magically going to make your writing too apparent you're improving. It's a very, very subtle thing. What you read matters a lot(like avoiding the aforementioned). For what it's worth your personal example not withstanding the chatgpt excerpts are fine and better than the usual /wg/ or really most ameatur stuff I've come across. Hang in there. You got this. Also, try not to rely on chatgpt at all because it will spoil you and ultimately you will never learn or grow this way.