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7/1/2025, 9:37:51 PM
>HEY! Anon get over I have a bone to pick with you. So I sat down and read your latest fiction books. They’re pretty good and all the characters have good interactions and dialogue. The pacing isn’t bad and you do take moments away from the action so the characters can grow and discuss. But then towards the ending of book 2 you start off the main villains redemption arc. What. The. Heck! He was evil and cruel and even if he thought he was doing the right thing he hurt millions of people and killed thousands more! Thats contrived Anon, nopony should be allowed to reform after being that far gone. I bet I’m not the only fan who thinks this is and if you wanna keep your readers loyalty you should have the bad guy get what he deserves. Oh and one more thing, and this is coming from Rarity but you need more romance. Theres a pretty girl right there with the main character and not once do they share a tender moment, smooch or even blush towards one another. Oh and Twilight says your book could be longer. Something about 400 pages being under the official guidelines of “established” authors.
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