>>7669272

Great work!

Right now her arms are the first things my eyes see when I look at this piece. This ends up taking away focus from her tits, expression, thighs and tummy. Which imo are higher on the hierarchy of importance in nsfw art

Use the Elements of Design as a tool to convey importance

For the edit:

I made her ribcage, arms and general upper half of her body smaller, and made her thighs/legs bigger. Her tits might seem bigger, but they take up relatively the same amount of space on the canvas as they did in the original, they just have more focus now that her arms and ribcage are smaller and take up less canvas space.

Your colors are super readable and fun to look at reminds me of shads old stuff, keep up the good work