Final Thoughts:

This story is an unmitigated disaster. Every single element here feels like bad fanfiction cobbled together from a bad Saturday morning cartoon, complete with shameless clichés, unnecessary drama, and predictable plot twists. If you’re looking for actual character development, solid world-building, or even a compelling villain, look elsewhere, because this is a mind-numbing slog. This isn’t a story worth your time—it’s a botched experiment that should have stayed buried in the trash where it belongs.

Zero stars. I’d rather get a branding of “Semper Obedire” on my skin than read this again.

This is like that "Like Chef Boyardee, my rhymes are truly cookin'" rap from Persona where blud thinks he's making kino but it's just pure autistic cringe and not even the good kind.