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7/11/2025, 6:37:01 AM
>>7641259
Good job anon.
If you want critique and that's not just your style, here's some - The perspective is off. The verticals and horizontals are parallel to the picture plane thus all perpendiculars should meet at a common center point where the picture is focused and roughly the one under the shop banner do, but all others don't. And the top surface of the wall to the left should not be visible since it's above the station point and the parallels on the boards at an angle to the picture plane do not converge at a common point.
Finally, all verticals should be parallel and point straight up, even those at an horizontal angle.
But great job at the composition. Really looks like a back alley establishment in a seedy urban district.
Good job anon.
If you want critique and that's not just your style, here's some - The perspective is off. The verticals and horizontals are parallel to the picture plane thus all perpendiculars should meet at a common center point where the picture is focused and roughly the one under the shop banner do, but all others don't. And the top surface of the wall to the left should not be visible since it's above the station point and the parallels on the boards at an angle to the picture plane do not converge at a common point.
Finally, all verticals should be parallel and point straight up, even those at an horizontal angle.
But great job at the composition. Really looks like a back alley establishment in a seedy urban district.
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