>>7629590
>>7629769
I agree. There are clear underlying issues to tackle first, and the eyes can easily be chalked up to style. It's hard to crit when the drawing isn't finished. so this was more for my warmup than anything.

This 1 character needs most work. I tried to "red line", but ended up just redrawing it. I dont do pure anime, so I doubt it'll help you much beyond what you already know. Just keep going, I guess.