>>527991325
I think it's excellent, the only part that's stuck out to me as odd is that for a guy who's an absolutely evil piece of shit and supposed to be an intimidating antagonist Nakamura sure seems very easily outsmarted.

How did Sca-ji make this absolute loser breaking into your house via the window and bluffing his ass off while trying to pretend he's not shitting himself the coolest thing in the world?