Thoughts on the mediocre /mydude/ fiction I wrote for a silly forum contest?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IE_EYDlRvifEAOlv7FjD4njCTH3191tAUi4_gYl6plc/edit?usp=drivesdk


If you can’t stand to read it, have (you) ever actually written anything for your guys and their enemies?