Gabriela:
The “petite, flat” trope? Really? This is the most basic, uninspired “character design for the millennial who is allergic to creativity.” And don’t even get me started on her “short habit with stockings.” What is she? A nun in an alternative universe where the Vatican also runs an anime convention?

Mamiko:
Okay, so Mamiko is the milf archetype. We get it. Her “clothing” is just a “loose-fitting Japanese robe” which apparently is only held together by her cleavage. Does she fight? Does she do anything other than just stand around and look like she’s about to drop some fan service?

Conclusion?

This is not a game, it’s a goddamn “What Not to Do” tutorial for character design. Every one of these characters has zero soul, no personality, and it’s like they were made using leftover RPG tropes, copy-pasted into a spreadsheet and just shuffled around like bad assets. Get rid of the clichés, stop making the female characters either “over-sexualized” or “boringly plain,” and please, for the love of **

No, hiring a pro mangaka is not going to save your little retard designs. You're going to need to get a fucking OVERHAUL and some THERAPY before you try this shit again, nibba lmao