On the topic of writing nitpicks, I also hate how a central conflict for Lily in the show is:

>"Jack cost me my gaming room, I'm so upset, I can't help but hold a grudge"

When... Jack doesn't own SHIT, look how fucking empty the room is with his stuff in it, he has like two boxes of stuff and a hammock. Why the FUCK don't they just take a single afternoon to switch rooms, Lily clearly had all of her gamer shit ready to be moved in there from Ep 1 before Jack came, and Jack is a fucking nature survivalist who wants to be outside exploring anyway, the whole Wylde Pak family is dumb as hell and I'm glad, I love them for it.