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Anonymous /vp/58001232#58015985
7/20/2025, 2:35:36 PM
I've been in the process of editing some of the stories I uploaded and I basically just finished them
https://archiveofourown.org/series/4025338

>what'd you edit?
this will not be a comprehensive list but essentially
- repetition. There's still multiple uses of some words but they're generally reference to specific contexts and not... literally baby's first fanfic writing without using tts two years ago to hear it nuh uh. most words that originally repeated are replaced with synonyms in specific places. Not all repetition could be ironed out, but a significant chunk was changed out
- better clarification on certain parts. This is miniscule but while some parts are meant to be vague , parts of the prose were edited to provide some proper context
- run-on sentences are either trimmed or heavily comma'd. A fuckton of semicolons were added to help flow some sentences and to convey tone better

the edits were applied specifically to PMD: The Amnesiacs and PMD: Chaos & Deception, and only the first thirteen chapters of the latter, because i intend to do the others once I am completed with that story in full (only its first part has reached conclusion in the back) or in the back while i work on that second part, whichever piques my mood the most.

i don't know if anyone will read it, and it's in the ff archive, but i just want to make an update on it since i will be going back to edit that other stuff but getting past this has been a major hurdle. This isn't to say it'll never need editing again, but I certainly hope it isn't this major in future

and if there is a lurker reading from here then i appreciate every last bit even if it's mute and silence from you. I'm much the same honestly