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7/18/2025, 10:58:41 PM
>>96050549
I think you should practice removing hold backs from your writing, stuff like 'some' this 'almost' that. Maybe use Notepad++ to check over how many times you use the same words, it can be pretty helpful.
You can shuffle your ideas together, focus on the action, and it'll create more flow. If you want to write a lot, write about more don't hold the reader in paralysis of exposition.
Second, focusing on 'why this is important' over 'this is what happens' will be more rewarding to the reader. Trust that we will fill in the blanks on nonessential details like how the boys make the wreaths, what all the women say and do, why the people do this or that. As is, this reads like an anthropological report you wrote for yourself to better understand the sequence of events rather than from a character viewpoint, but it's not like that's bad.
gonna follow up on this with this passage in my own words, maybe it'll inspire you, hopefully so since you inspired me.
I think you should practice removing hold backs from your writing, stuff like 'some' this 'almost' that. Maybe use Notepad++ to check over how many times you use the same words, it can be pretty helpful.
You can shuffle your ideas together, focus on the action, and it'll create more flow. If you want to write a lot, write about more don't hold the reader in paralysis of exposition.
Second, focusing on 'why this is important' over 'this is what happens' will be more rewarding to the reader. Trust that we will fill in the blanks on nonessential details like how the boys make the wreaths, what all the women say and do, why the people do this or that. As is, this reads like an anthropological report you wrote for yourself to better understand the sequence of events rather than from a character viewpoint, but it's not like that's bad.
gonna follow up on this with this passage in my own words, maybe it'll inspire you, hopefully so since you inspired me.
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