>>7662411
Fishimote:
A penisjoke, inserted with appropriate timing. Amazing. The art makes me think about the times I used to read manga under school time and the art teacher would beat my ass for it. Verbally of course. The art in b/w is clear, it is expressive. THe world is expanded upon, it's great.
Bakutsu:
I feel with how much there is drawn, there is either a lack of will or a lack of respect. It shows the physical place, but no other teammembers, commentators or DM. Even the opponent has but 1 panel. I want to see more effort.
Vote: Fishimote

Caddie, Ririna, Ax'pos, Ivy en Mara will get feedback once I have some time alone again.