I'm on chapter 8, my new work.
I have already gotten a (fair) review on here, that my prose was okay. And my pace, POV, etc
I would humbly beg?
here i chapter 8.
dialog chapter.
Turning point. All the gumshoe legwork ,no traction, churning wheels? its coming together.
This is the turning point.
after this, its about to get ugly.
I feel like I've learned to use dialog, to drop knowledge on the reader.
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I'm one of your own, and trying to bring back noir paperback pulps.
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https://moonquillnovels.com/book/white-death/chapter/33135/chapter-08-whitewash