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7/20/2025, 5:33:46 AM
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So now not only do we have a strong justification for why magical ice arrows are being used over normal arrows, but we have a strong justification for why a competitor could make a such an awful mistake. And on top of that, this event serves to highlight the overall theme of the episode: winning isn't everything. Fixating only on being the one at the top will lead to failure. Spike let his fame get to his head and was reminded of his flaws. He tried to restore his pride (when it didn't need restoring) by singing the anthem, and it was a disaster. Meanwhile, hotheaded Rainbow Dash has finally learned to be satisfied with getting silver. There's a strong lesson here about pushing yourself too hard, and it's strongly reflected throughout all the various subplots.
As the cloud turns to ice and threatens to crush the crowd, we get an additional payoff with the disabling spell providing a reason for the various magic users to be helpless. From a writing perspective, this spell and the ice arrows were added to contrive a scenario where only Spike could save the day. Notably, Rainbow and the other pegasi are not helpless and do their best to minimize the damage. When watching the slow descent of the ice and how quickly ponies are able to flee from it, I think there's a good chance nopony would have gotten seriously hurt. This is a bad situation, to be sure, but it's not as if the ponies are completely helpless, and I think this strengthens the storytelling. If it was a far more serious problem where only Spike could do anything at all, that would add to the contrivance. Instead, it's an unlucky accident, but not a particularly unreasonable one considering the size of these games. This is why I think this episode serves as an excellent lesson in writing. There was a very specific payoff to be reached, but because of all the work that went into justifying the narrative elements needed to set it up, it doesn't present as a contrivance at all. Rather, it's a fairly straightforward consequence arising from things that would reasonably exist in this world. This is not only a good lesson in worldbuilding, but a great lesson in how worldbuilding enhances a story by providing those building blocks on which to create tension and drama without it being outlandish.
8/10ish
So now not only do we have a strong justification for why magical ice arrows are being used over normal arrows, but we have a strong justification for why a competitor could make a such an awful mistake. And on top of that, this event serves to highlight the overall theme of the episode: winning isn't everything. Fixating only on being the one at the top will lead to failure. Spike let his fame get to his head and was reminded of his flaws. He tried to restore his pride (when it didn't need restoring) by singing the anthem, and it was a disaster. Meanwhile, hotheaded Rainbow Dash has finally learned to be satisfied with getting silver. There's a strong lesson here about pushing yourself too hard, and it's strongly reflected throughout all the various subplots.
As the cloud turns to ice and threatens to crush the crowd, we get an additional payoff with the disabling spell providing a reason for the various magic users to be helpless. From a writing perspective, this spell and the ice arrows were added to contrive a scenario where only Spike could save the day. Notably, Rainbow and the other pegasi are not helpless and do their best to minimize the damage. When watching the slow descent of the ice and how quickly ponies are able to flee from it, I think there's a good chance nopony would have gotten seriously hurt. This is a bad situation, to be sure, but it's not as if the ponies are completely helpless, and I think this strengthens the storytelling. If it was a far more serious problem where only Spike could do anything at all, that would add to the contrivance. Instead, it's an unlucky accident, but not a particularly unreasonable one considering the size of these games. This is why I think this episode serves as an excellent lesson in writing. There was a very specific payoff to be reached, but because of all the work that went into justifying the narrative elements needed to set it up, it doesn't present as a contrivance at all. Rather, it's a fairly straightforward consequence arising from things that would reasonably exist in this world. This is not only a good lesson in worldbuilding, but a great lesson in how worldbuilding enhances a story by providing those building blocks on which to create tension and drama without it being outlandish.
8/10ish
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