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I'm wondering what anons think about the seamless transition between prose and dialogue in this manner. Is it too jarring? or does it work?
Granted, this is an extreme example, since most of it isn't as poetic like this. I'm reserving most of the "metred" dialogue to the two main characters to give it a certain loftiness (although it's mostly because I enjoy, which is to say prefer, writing in verse).