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>But I cannot stop myself from caring about that fiction rank number!
picrel, old obviously, wont dox myself. i understand the addiction. please trust me when i say review swap circlejerks are only for total failures. the fact you believed it would "help a lot" means you're taking advice from the wrong places. go find advice from people who actually have some success
>I feel like any elegant 'ojousama' character giggles elegantly when they're not going all out with an ohoho laugh, but I can't be assed to find examples.
Giggling is quite literally defined as a "silly" laugh, uncontrolled, etc. It's like saying "She sprinted slowly down the alleyway" or some shit, it sounds ridiculous. To me at least. Giggles cannot be elegant.
>Beth covered her mouth and laughed quietly, eyes sparkling.
is how I would (first draft) write that idea. implies an elegant, controlled laugh that isn't raucous/true laughter