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7/5/2025, 4:09:57 PM
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My only other slight gripe is that I felt like the text went by too fast during Toge's autistic rants. I wanted to fully read what he had to say, but it sped through so fast I missed some of it and had to go back to fully take in his glorious sperging. I might have had my text speed set too fast though, I'm not very technical when it comes to that sort of stuff.
In terms of really minor stuff I really liked, I loved Toge's personalised Team Cozy rug in his room that you just know he made himself. I also liked the tiny bit of foreshadowing where Toge lifts Gill out of the tiny crater, before having to pull off a more extreme version of the same feat later, in a much more heroic fashion. That was a nice moment that really showed off how useful Toge really is in a pinch and that he has skills that are more impressive than he would like to believe; that's he's always been stronger than he gives himself credit for.
The sheer volume of guildmon cameos that you managed to squeeze in is incredibly impressive, especially with how naturally you had them all placed around the guild doing a huge amount of different things. It was fun going around reading everyone's little bits of dialogue, though it made me realize how lackluster the dialogue I wrote for my characters specifically was. I feel like I fucked up and missed a big opportunity to do more with them, but that's on me for not paying enough attention when I had the option to do more than I realized. I wish I'd revised it because their dialogue is clunky and retarded. Not that it matters at all, since literally all of that is totally optional. It's a learning experience I guess. Team Petal-Purr wins the award for most boring bitches in the whole guild. Not me accidentally proving that the first all-female team have nothing interesting to say.
Also this Houndour sprite I edited myself is fucking dogshit and I regret making it and wish I hadn't bothered at all.
3/3
My only other slight gripe is that I felt like the text went by too fast during Toge's autistic rants. I wanted to fully read what he had to say, but it sped through so fast I missed some of it and had to go back to fully take in his glorious sperging. I might have had my text speed set too fast though, I'm not very technical when it comes to that sort of stuff.
In terms of really minor stuff I really liked, I loved Toge's personalised Team Cozy rug in his room that you just know he made himself. I also liked the tiny bit of foreshadowing where Toge lifts Gill out of the tiny crater, before having to pull off a more extreme version of the same feat later, in a much more heroic fashion. That was a nice moment that really showed off how useful Toge really is in a pinch and that he has skills that are more impressive than he would like to believe; that's he's always been stronger than he gives himself credit for.
The sheer volume of guildmon cameos that you managed to squeeze in is incredibly impressive, especially with how naturally you had them all placed around the guild doing a huge amount of different things. It was fun going around reading everyone's little bits of dialogue, though it made me realize how lackluster the dialogue I wrote for my characters specifically was. I feel like I fucked up and missed a big opportunity to do more with them, but that's on me for not paying enough attention when I had the option to do more than I realized. I wish I'd revised it because their dialogue is clunky and retarded. Not that it matters at all, since literally all of that is totally optional. It's a learning experience I guess. Team Petal-Purr wins the award for most boring bitches in the whole guild. Not me accidentally proving that the first all-female team have nothing interesting to say.
Also this Houndour sprite I edited myself is fucking dogshit and I regret making it and wish I hadn't bothered at all.
3/3
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