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7/15/2025, 7:31:16 PM
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>Take Lamatyi's involvement in all arcs other than the Pelupelu secondary to the other candidates, who have more prominent showings in each one (her learning the value of simple trade was honestly really cute and was excellent for showing her integration into the culture) and instead have the other candidates actively in the foreground
>Have her initially fail each task but later succeed with the help of each of the tribes she needed to culturally understand, showing that she's not only always in need of their help, but is also actively learning their world manually rather than passively
>Get rid of the inane Solo Duty, nobody cares that she can fight Bakool Ja Ja and other than him running away sad, it didn't add anything to the story
>Have her stay planted in Tuliyollal during everything from Shaaloani onwards. At most, just show random shots of her defending the capital (maybe even a "cool" shot of her standing alone in front of the gates with her arms crossed) as both a symbolic measure that she's going to protect everybody and a literal measure to tell the WoL about the current state of the Vanguard threat
>Krile and Erenville Focus in Heritage Found can be entirely with those two, as the area is entirely for them, and the involvement of Sphene is more something related to the WoL, who has now gone from being a savior of their world to the destroyer of another, leaning into the end of Dawntrail being a sombre and dour note suggesting that their incompatible society would only lead to the destruction of one or both of their worlds
>Wuk Lamat, having now spent the entire arc just learning about cultures and defending her own, stumbles in after you've defeated Sphene and confirms that the Vanguard are all inactive, and sees the dead ruins of a long-gone civilization, promising to learn about them and hopefully one day give them new life/light/whatever
There, I'll take my check now Yoshi-P
>Take Lamatyi's involvement in all arcs other than the Pelupelu secondary to the other candidates, who have more prominent showings in each one (her learning the value of simple trade was honestly really cute and was excellent for showing her integration into the culture) and instead have the other candidates actively in the foreground
>Have her initially fail each task but later succeed with the help of each of the tribes she needed to culturally understand, showing that she's not only always in need of their help, but is also actively learning their world manually rather than passively
>Get rid of the inane Solo Duty, nobody cares that she can fight Bakool Ja Ja and other than him running away sad, it didn't add anything to the story
>Have her stay planted in Tuliyollal during everything from Shaaloani onwards. At most, just show random shots of her defending the capital (maybe even a "cool" shot of her standing alone in front of the gates with her arms crossed) as both a symbolic measure that she's going to protect everybody and a literal measure to tell the WoL about the current state of the Vanguard threat
>Krile and Erenville Focus in Heritage Found can be entirely with those two, as the area is entirely for them, and the involvement of Sphene is more something related to the WoL, who has now gone from being a savior of their world to the destroyer of another, leaning into the end of Dawntrail being a sombre and dour note suggesting that their incompatible society would only lead to the destruction of one or both of their worlds
>Wuk Lamat, having now spent the entire arc just learning about cultures and defending her own, stumbles in after you've defeated Sphene and confirms that the Vanguard are all inactive, and sees the dead ruins of a long-gone civilization, promising to learn about them and hopefully one day give them new life/light/whatever
There, I'll take my check now Yoshi-P
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