>>24547522
>>24547524
Okay now I read kaiju.
That's it?/s
Reading these two today I realized I have no idea what makes something good writing or even interesting to me. I know when it is interesting in retrospect, but I'd waste my time right now trying to say what it takes. Reading Starship Operators, or Crest/Banner of the Stars, or even Knight's & Magic (the weakest of the three) I feel a pull, it just works and makes me wanna keep reading. I read these two out of a sense of obligation, not interest. And now I can't explain what wasn't working for me. I don't think there was anything technically wrong, or at least not notably so. I like the subject matter. The length wasn't obnoxious. If I went off vibes I could maybe say it was sauceless? As in, things happened but they weren't particularly interesting things or weren't being told in an interesting way. I'm not saying this to be mean, but I also don't know how you could fix this (I don't write).
>>24547551
Above largely applies to you too. Maybe I could say I can see the inspiration but I can't feel the love for the subject? I don't know, and I don't feel good casting aspersions upon you two so I'll quit here.